Ultimate XXX Erotica – Volume 1

Lilly Gauge

1 Stars

Ultimate XXX Erotica: Volume 1 by Lilly Gauge has a lot of grammatical issues.

A lot of the he/she wrong, issues such as when the author is talking about the “hot baby” then in the next part call her a he.

It made reading this a lot more challenging, you had to concentrate more not to get lost.  I also found that the stories were very similar to the previous one.

With those issues aside the sex was good with very descriptive. Ultimate XXX Erotica – Volume 1 was a free download, I do not suggest you buy this.

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